Universal Speed Curriculum Playtesting Cleanup

I've had the opportunity to sit down and play {lo do ckiku ma zvati}. Working through {le vajrai se tadni}, I found several issues that required correction.

Some are outright bugs and grammar mistakes, others are refinements from my experience during play:

  • I did not remove one elidible terminator during the last update.

  • I've replaced the use of {ja'a} with {je'a} in Part I, for consistency with Part II.

  • Finally, I cleaned up some ASL word-order problems and added a missing {je'a} to the last statement in Part II.

I'm not happy that Part I consists of bridi statements, whereas part II consists of sumti. I can't effectively fix this for part II, and the sample translations I've performed to convert Part I to sumti haven't felt right to me. The grammar usage shifts somewhat abruptly between part I and part II as a result.

This is likely the last edit I'll be doing before beginning to work on part III: Want. Translating Part III has been on my mind a lot, as that section has one tricky issue to deal with as well.

Enjoy the update!:

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